The Divine Dark & the Evil Light - Vinod Balan

Author: Vinod Balan

Genre: Sci-Fi Novella
Rating: 2 stars.


The storyline is decent. There was something that was intended as a surprise twist at the end. Unfortunately, I could guess it in the first chapter itself, so even that didn't work out for me.

The author needs to work a lot on grammatical, stylistic and usage-based elements. A detailed feedback has been sent to him privately.

I know that this author is talented in terms of creativity. I have read a horror anthology written by him and it was astounding in its imagination (though it too suffered from major grammatical problems.) This time though, neither the plot nor the writing methodology kept me invested.

Thank you for sending me your book in exchange for an honest review, Vinod. Best wishes to your future endeavours.

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